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Post by Kojin on Nov 19, 2005 0:03:25 GMT -5
Kojins enemy ever since he was 3 was Atokadon. Even though Kojin was 3 his power level was 1,000. And Atokadon's was 900.After they first met th battle already started.Kojin dived to the ground while shooting a kamehameha wave. But when he hit the ground he was hit with a Ki blast. they both shot into the air. after that Atokadon was pounded into the ground. This is what blew up half a quarter of Vegeta. Kojin yelled, "KA!! ME!! HA!! ME!! HA!!!! The battle against them was so fierce that it blew up a half a quarter of planet Vegeta. But now even as vice ruler of Vegeta he still hunts for Atokadon. To destroy him once and for all.
The End...till next time
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Post by Kai "Jin" Kaizu on Nov 19, 2005 0:09:14 GMT -5
No rate until you fix these mistakes
1.right about the fight
2.right way more
3. make it make sense
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Post by Kai "Jin" Kaizu on Nov 19, 2005 0:27:27 GMT -5
Kojin:3,000
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